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How do you respond when you put in the work and the result still isn't good enough?

Persistence past the point where effort stops paying off — which describes most of preclinical lab work.

Written by Victoria Young, DDS · NYU College of Dentistry '24 · Penn Dental Medicine

The trap

Framing it as a story of pure grit. Repeating the same approach harder is what struggling dental students do. Getting feedback and changing technique is what the good ones do — say that.

How to structure your answer

A specific instance → your honest emotional reaction → what you changed rather than just repeating → the eventual outcome, even if imperfect.

A weak answer

What most people say
There was a class where I studied harder than I ever had and still didn't get the grade I wanted. It was discouraging, but I'm not somebody who gives up easily. I put in even more hours going into the next exam and I ended up doing much better by the end. It taught me that persistence really does pay off eventually.

More hours, same method, which is exactly what struggling students do.

A stronger answer

What lands
Biochemistry. I was working thirty hours a week on a call center schedule, put maybe fifteen hours into the first midterm and got a 61. Studied more for the second one and got a 64, which somehow felt worse. So I took my notes to the professor and he pointed out I was rereading and highlighting and never once closing the book. I switched to drawing pathways blank on a whiteboard with a tutor twice a week. Final was a 79. Course grade was a B-minus and it's still the lowest thing on my transcript.

Changed method rather than intensity, named who helped, and the outcome stays imperfect.

Grit is the first answer's entire plan. The second one worked out that the plan itself was wrong.

These are illustrations, not scripts. An answer you memorize sounds memorized — the point is the shape and the specificity, in your own words and about your own life.

Reading it isn't the same as saying it.

Most people can explain a good answer and still fall apart saying one out loud. Admitted asks you all 100 questions in a faculty voice, records you, and scores your pace and filler words.

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